Kay Kay

Just as i used to say i love your style. I liked this piece and think it was well written. No crit...can't wait to read more. I think you might ...

Hey welcome to the site. I'm Kay Kay and feel free to PM me anytime. I'm on almost every day so I'll see you around the forums.

Hey welcome to the site. If you ever need anything feel free to PM me. I'm on almost every day so I will get back to you soon. I'm Kayla ...

Hey Sorceress welcome to YWS! I'm Kay Kay. Feel free to PM me anytime if you ever need anything and I'll be happy to help.

Hey EsqualEtMoi! Welcome to YWS. I'm Kayla but you can call me Kay Kay. If you ever need anything feel free to PM me and I'll get back to you ...

Hey welcome to the site. I'm kayla. If you ever need anything feel free to PM me.

Hey hunter! My name is Kayla and welcome to the site. If you ever need anything feel free to PM me.

Thanks for the crit. I will post more soon.

I enjoyed it!!! Can't wait to read more. I didn't see any useless information. Hope i helped.

There isn't much left to crit but here's what I have to say. You seem to be rushing through this passage to get everything out. Take a deep breath and ...

“They're gonna clean up your looks with all the lies in the books to make a citizen out of you,” a guy called Trickster sang from the back of class ...

You went from first to second point of view?? Wow that's hard to do. I liked this better than chapter one. It's even more interesting. I can't wait to read ...

Love it. I can't wait to read more.

I enjoyed it. You should write more.

Short. So I'm guessing that this vampire leads people into the woods to kill them? I liked the detail but would suggest more so that we can get a mental ...